Writing Goals

Work On sentence fluency

Use a variety of sentance starters

Self edit carefuly

Tuesday, November 30, 2010

Jungle

The jungle is a wild and crazy as my room. Anything and everything can live in it even I find tnew things every day. When my mom walks past my room she gets pissed and I have to pick it up every day she thinks that I have learned my lesson but I haven't . That is what the jungle is in my eyes.

Monday, November 8, 2010

Short Stories

It was a windy day when the man crossed the road and went into the bus station. The man waited hours and hours for the bus to come the sun drew to dusk. There were cars filling the street with light. One man pulled to the side of the road and saw this man sitting at the bus stop. The man in the car called him in. He said “sir why are you letting me in your car” The other man said “where do you want to go”. Later that day they went shopping and did everything together. Both the men felt great. The homeless guy felt great his life had been changed because of that one man. The man brought him in but since the homeless guy had no education what so ever he thought he was being kidnapped. So the man looked panicky through the house to find a gun finally he found a 44. Magnum and held the man hostage and copied a famous quote now you have to question your self did I fire 5 shots or 6 well are you felling lucky punk well do ya. Then the man called the police and the homeless man ran and ran until the page ended.

Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Haloween

Halloween is one of the best holidays of the year it might not get recognized every where but it sucks for the people that don't get it. I got 20lbs of candy this year. Some new family's in my neighborhood don't know the bowl rule yet but I think I taught them. The bowl rule is when it says take one but since they aren't home you take all of it. When the bowl rule thinks that you have no soul when you go to some houses other bowl rulers have taken it, that's bad karma. I take trick or treating as a sport.