Writing Goals

Work On sentence fluency

Use a variety of sentance starters

Self edit carefuly

Monday, November 8, 2010

Short Stories

It was a windy day when the man crossed the road and went into the bus station. The man waited hours and hours for the bus to come the sun drew to dusk. There were cars filling the street with light. One man pulled to the side of the road and saw this man sitting at the bus stop. The man in the car called him in. He said “sir why are you letting me in your car” The other man said “where do you want to go”. Later that day they went shopping and did everything together. Both the men felt great. The homeless guy felt great his life had been changed because of that one man. The man brought him in but since the homeless guy had no education what so ever he thought he was being kidnapped. So the man looked panicky through the house to find a gun finally he found a 44. Magnum and held the man hostage and copied a famous quote now you have to question your self did I fire 5 shots or 6 well are you felling lucky punk well do ya. Then the man called the police and the homeless man ran and ran until the page ended.

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