Writing Goals

Work On sentence fluency

Use a variety of sentance starters

Self edit carefuly

Wednesday, February 22, 2012

The Consperacy Theory

Dear Future Self,

If you are reading this you are still pondering the thought of Jonas and his absence. Did you forget, you helped him plan his escape? But you are wondering why? Well the main reason was because he saw what they were going to do to Gabriel the new child, yet there were other factors. He could handle the pain, for the most part but it was stressful trying to keep the secrets. In addition to that you are wondering why you would let him leave, leaving you to handle the havoc of the community? Well its not like it was your first time if you could do it with Rosemary you can do it again but this will take a lot more time. You did well on this choice get it out of your head and just give. But don't tell them the truth say that he drowned in the river and celebrate the loss.

Until You Think of This Again ,
The Giver

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