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Friday, May 11, 2012

For quality windows siding and doors call 866 4Feldco


Hi my names paul; i'm a window on 42nd streets Wilson house. Over the years the Wilsons have neglected to clean us the windows on their house. We have gone through deep freezes of the winter, rapid rain in the spring along with blazing dust storms but the worst, the dead bugs. I wish I could just flick the bugs off but, with what hands. I have been crying out to them to not just wash me but all of us knowing that they've gone through the same thing as I.

Finally it was summer and we really got their attention. We would close right when they opened us and when they closed us we opened, by golly they were furious. It finally looked like we were about to be cleaned  until the Wilson kid showed up with his gang of friends. They started to play baseball and what do you know they broke Fred the window just above me. Immediately Mrs Wilson started to panic and call Feldco, soon after they replaced ted they took a look at all of us. They were finally thinking of cleaning us when they decided it would take to long and they would need more elbow grease than what they had.

Sadly right before the repair men had left Mr Wilson asked them to replace all of us and so we sit now in a landfill longing to be cleaned.

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