Writing Goals 1 Stay on Topic 2 Use a Variety of Sentence Starters 3 Self Edit Carefully
Writing Goals
Work On sentence fluency
Use a variety of sentance starters
Self edit carefuly
Use a variety of sentance starters
Self edit carefuly
Tuesday, February 15, 2011
Chain story edited
Once upon a time there was a man, a man so ugly that by the kings rule he could never leave his house nor anyone see him. The man soon started to plot revenge towards the king. He thought and thought and thought until an unannounced visitor knocked on his door. He opened the door since he hadn't seen someone in ages. The person was a girl who was very ugly just like him. But he didn't just like how she'd looked but her personality was just like his. They had multiple dates and all of their trash piled up and no one came to pick it up because it was also ugly. Soon as it piled even higher and higher everyone could smell the sent and fled town. Their trash started to grow arms legs and a head. It looked at the couple and asked what it should do and since the man had been locked up for so long the women said " Kill the king " and the man responded " Yes indeed kill the king then the queen for fun," .Then they followed the monster and the monster ate the king and said " That's Delicious" and soon went after the queen. Once he licked her he threw her 10 miles because she was too sour. The ugly couple ruled the land and lived happily ever after.
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