Writing Goals

Work On sentence fluency

Use a variety of sentance starters

Self edit carefuly

Friday, February 18, 2011

Stormbreaker

What would it be like if your uncle who you’ve lived with for almost your whole life had died? In this story we meet Alex Rider. Ian his uncle was the closest thing he had to parents for a long time. Alex was lucky that the “Bank “Ian had worked for gave Jack a permanent Visa. Once the co-workers Ian had worked with came over Alex’s life changed.


When the co-workers had a thorough discussion with Alex he understood what had happened better. Soon Alex also learned in that discussion that they weren’t a bank. His uncle had really worked for MI6. MI6 is like the USA’s FBI but more intense. Now Alex had a choice and he wanted to work for them but he knew the risk. He followed them to their worksite which was disguised as a bank. When he was in the building they took him to a random office. They locked him in there it was a test. Alex wanted to see what was going on in his uncle’s office. Alex opened the window and jumped onto the ledge. He noticed how high up he was but then he noticed the flags and quickly jumped and caught it. Yet he started to slip and he got their attention and they got him.


With that he was given his first assignment “The Stormbreaker”. The Stormbreaker is a computer that has subjects on it and is only used for academics’. First they had to win the competition because whoever one got to test it out. They found out the kid that won and gave him a even better prize. They needed to test it because the inventor was Herod Sayle (he isn’t the best person). Alex’s job was to scout the place out and find out if there was anything weird going on with it. There was only a limited amount of time he had and chances to snoop around. He lots of little gadgets to use like James Bond. When he was situated in his room he looked for bugs with his see through walls gameboy.


Soon Alex had figured out that there was a lab and they were putting a terrible vaccine/poising in the computer. Then Alex had thought back to what he had heard and it made sense. Herod Sayle was bullied while in school and he wanted revenge so he was going to kill every kid in England. Then while Alex was snooping around he got caught and was thrown in the tank with the jelly fish. He managed to escape.


Herod Sayle was at the museum about to launch the Stormbreaker and kill every kid. Alex crashed through the roof and stopped everything. Alex rider saved the day. That is the end to the stormbreaker he still has many more mission’s ahead.

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