Writing Goals

Work On sentence fluency

Use a variety of sentance starters

Self edit carefuly

Thursday, March 22, 2012

GUMMI BEARS!?!

Scrumptious, Yumptios, they fit in my tumptios,
They are sweet and sugary better than my boogeries,
and they beat the smores on the end of my sword,
With the gluten mixed with the fruitin,
This is why they are gummy and yummy that fit in my tummy.

When they are gone I sing a little song,
Short and sweet better than my feet,
It has a little toon that will come up soon.

When the gummies left there had been a theft
my brother stole them and took a hold of them
He put them in his face and slaughtered them all
Then I played them taps and said a little rap.

O gummies you were so very yummy
but your time has come to sing your little song
That will kill the thrill of the end
Because it is short and sweet and better than my feet
Your time has come to an end.

1 comment:

  1. Nice dude! It's so awesome! You should right more poems.

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